I dont understand why it has a low rating but who cares, its only a number, the writing is awsome

Baby your poem is excellent it really is ur best....i just wish i could take this all away from you and leave with with all the happiness in the world i'd do anything just to see you smile i love you babe xox me

"Never will she stop to think
Of all the people she'll miss
You call it 'ignorance'
But ignorance is bliss"

I love this stanza.... Overall, I really like this poem.
-victoria-

Holy fuk........thats soooo sad n emotional.......loved the endin btw....5/5......keep writin...also ur poem hand in hand is 5/5 too.

nami

Well .,,,.,.,.i loved how yre words did flow in way that was so natural and spontaneous.in the other side, it's so tragic and sad.

best of luck,
just wishesssss

Hey thanks for commenting on my poem :)
i really like this, and how u use third person too.
you write really well! its really similiar to my style.. ive added you as a favourite, so ill comment on any of your new poems, feel free to do the same for me :)
love kristy
oh yeah and 5/5 FOR SURE!
love kristy.

Great poem 5/5 definately :)

Wow thanx 4 the nice comment u left me on my poem....and ur poem realli touched me nd wuz deep, i loved it soo much ur a great write
keep it up ;]
~MaRiAh~

This in an awesome poem!! thanks for your comment on my poem!! i really appriciate it!! you are such a good writer! never let anyone tell you different!!

Wow this is a really touching poem, i feel her pain. well written, look forward to reading more of your work
xx rachel xx

Love it.

Omg...its beautiful, and so sad.. 5/5