Behind My Mask

It's very short but it's straight to the point. Great choice of wording. Well done 5/5

~ Tina

Behind this smile theres an ocean
Desolate and bleak
Murky waters stain my pride
My soul's aching and weak.

I loved these lines the imagery was so rich. I guess at some point everyone hides behind a mask and you expressed the sadness that comes with constantly pretendig well.

Your "theres" in this should be "there's".

It was a very sad poem with excellent vocab. I'm amazed with this poem. It was very well written. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Awesome poem. Loved the words you used. Seemed more like a 'mature' poem than 'teenage poetry'. Well described scene.

Impressive write. Written simply with good use of diction to convay the message powerfully.
First line of the second stanza, it should be "there's."
On the very last line remember to capitalise I to keep it gramatically correct. A well crafted piece, thanks for sharing.