The Darkness

by Sarah Dowlly   Mar 30, 2006


I lie awake upon my bed
Pain, confusion, darkness in my head
The torment never leaves, the scars run deep
My mind races, while my body longs for sleep.

I cant go on feeling this way
Make it stop, I hope, I pray
Ashamed by misery, I yearn for clues
As to the cause of my unholy blues.

Consumed by darkness, my thoughts now a blur
Beneath the surface, the demons stir
laughing, pointing, mocking my pain
As though my anguish is one big game.

Dominated by grief, is my wretched mind
Longing for peace, I know i wont find
Loneliness is fatal, the cause of my demise
I'm powerless against it no one hears my cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    I loved this one. The pain really shows through. The reader really feels it... Great job 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, great job again! You're a great writer! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem!

    -Stephanie-

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    The torment never leaves, the scars run deep
    My mind races, while my body longs for sleep.
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    I loved those lines. They were FANTASTIC!

    The poem overall was great. The flow and rhyming were pretty good. You did a great job! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by clemo

    Very well written
    It describes what im going through now

    thanx for sharing

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    Very good, this was an amazing poem...the ryme scheme, the word choice. all of it was great. 5/5

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