I really enjoyed reading you're poem, keep on writing, 5/5

Very good, this was an amazing poem...the ryme scheme, the word choice. all of it was great. 5/5

Very well written
It describes what im going through now

thanx for sharing

The torment never leaves, the scars run deep
My mind races, while my body longs for sleep.
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I loved those lines. They were FANTASTIC!

The poem overall was great. The flow and rhyming were pretty good. You did a great job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow, great job again! You're a great writer! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem!

-Stephanie-

I loved this one. The pain really shows through. The reader really feels it... Great job 5/5

~ Tina