Wonderful poem, I really like how it was structured, very original. 5/5

Nice job. Very emotional
-Vino

I loved this poem, very powerful def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Well flowing, smooth all the way, keep it up. you are quite talented. 5/5

Another Great poem

Just as vivid and poignant as th last poem. i really like your work, tho it does make me sad.
xx

I love the way this poem rhymes, adds to the effect. good work!
zoe xxx

Wow..amazing! i like the way the emotion increases as the poem progresses.

lonelynow xxxxxxxx

U really put ur thoughts out there... seriously a great poem!

I like it alot and can relate! keep up the beautiful write! 5/5
ashley

That was really good. I really liked it. I am not sure exactly why, but it just hit the spot. You have a true talent, and thanks for the comment, it means alot coming from someone with as much talent as you.

Another well written and sad poem, just an fyi however, the only ppl who are alone are those that want to be alone

Beautiful

Ahh im jealous i wish i was as good as u at poetry

Hey sis...another good one by you...well written

-Jason-

Awesome!Very strong.5/5
<3Amber

please check out some of mine.

It's very emotional, a bit sad though, but I love it