Amazing poem...I know what you mean. lol, thanks for your comments...5/5

Awesome poem. I liked it. 5/5
-Vino

I know what you are going through.. a few years ago I had real bad dreams but.. I bought a dream catcher.. trust me, it works.

Wow! this is really good and the ending is amazing ; once dead I wont longer dream.

brilliant 5/5

Awesome. keep up the nice work. i love the use of words and how you created the picture so well with them

Great Poem

This is more of a narrative story. It is still poetry, but a different style. It's not to bad. Keep writing.

Your language, your style and imagry capture the content beautifully. even the sentance stucture and line formation adds power. nice work. :)
xx

This is a very amazing poem. You have made me cry and stare in awe, all at once. I have never read anything this deep and sad, especially not poetry. Now to go to rhyming scheme. Rhyming scheme is extremely good. I like it a lot. Very unique, keep up work like this and you'll be great!

Wow that was good i dont usually comment on poems but this was good i think i'll read more of your poems...Keep up the good work

"I can now leave all the screams"
that is an excellent line that really made the poem sound phenominal..excellently written and definetly worth my 5/5
good job!!

This reminds me of my uncle, who is in the army, and he was shipped out and came back three months later, almost all the other soldiers had died, but to him they were not just soldiers, they were his friends.
when he came back he wasnt the same, he refused to sleep because he kept having nightmares about when he saw his friends die, after a while it really got to him and he tried to commit suicide, but when it actually came to it, he couldnt do it- thank god!

xX velvet kisses Xx

Really good poem
shows some character
you should check out the new
poems i posted and let me know what
ya think

-sk8er101-

Awesome poem 5/5

You are very talented im not going to write a comment in all of them....BUT AMAZING JOB *hugs*

Aww hun this one is really sad i can relate

This is a good job 8/8

Thanks for commenting on my poem. just wondered if instead of "i wont longer dream" maybe use "i'll no longer dream". but i don't know.

Tut tut
you should never let blood go to waste
vampire!

This isn't a poem i would care to associate you with sis...but life is not always what we want now is it

-Jason-