Your Love

by LiL K   Mar 30, 2006


You're the essence of my world
and the rhythm of my heart,
You have set my soul on fire
from just a tiny spark.

You're the pulse within my veins
and my vision when I can't see,
Every single thing about you
brings out the best in me.

You're the thoughts inside my head
and my balance when I fall,
You've got my body, heart and soul
...Baby you've got it all.

You're my past, present, and future
and my happiness when I'm down,
While I was searching for myself
your love was what I found.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Very sweet poem it needs a more endearing title. You write from within or at least I get that impression from your poems. It doesnt feel planned as love often isnt....its as if you spoke them onto the page and they came out this way....stunning.....

    :o) thanks for all your encouraging comments... All the best.

    [lost_laureate]

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Oh wow, lovely poem. Great!!! I loved how you wrote it, it has so much feelings put in to it. Great job!!!

    Oh, and thanks for your sweet words on mine. :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awwe. this is adorable. Sounds like you really love this person : ) amazing poem, i truly love your writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Though I hate when people you use the word baby, the poem was really beautiful. The title wasn't strong enough but it did tie in extremely well. Maybe you should try and tap into that writing talent some more. HOnestly, I'd like to read your poems then. They might be nothing short of amazing;y pretty.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Great job! It flowed nicely & wasn't all chopped up. 5/5*

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