Searching.......

by David Wallace   Mar 30, 2006


I search 4 the meaning of life to attain perfection

I search 4 perfection in order to reject human error

Human error results to obstacles tumbling over the finish line

I search 4 the finish line to acquire serenity

I search 4 serenity to blockade the existence of hate

hate leads to deceit

deceit leads 2 lies

lies lead to the demolishment of truth

I search 4 the truth to erase my horrid visions flashing b4 my eyes

I search 4 vision to see the invisible

And I search 4 the courage to search deep within myself.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    VERY interesting! i loved how detailed the poem was understanding the emotion and painting a perfect picture in my mind! thank you for the comment on my poem.
    well done!!

    mandy

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Very creative write and I loved how each line ws introducing the next.
    so much depth to this poem and it really made me think about life.
    The meaning, the feelings...life as a whole and not just the good or the bad times.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Nice poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Oh wow this was a great poem with so much depth and emphasis in the meaning. I love how each line lead to the next. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5

    [ xxx Thank you for your comment on my poem xxx ]

  • 18 years ago

    by SEAN

    Well written

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