Well written

Oh wow this was a great poem with so much depth and emphasis in the meaning. I love how each line lead to the next. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5

[ xxx Thank you for your comment on my poem xxx ]

Nice poem!!!

Very creative write and I loved how each line ws introducing the next.
so much depth to this poem and it really made me think about life.
The meaning, the feelings...life as a whole and not just the good or the bad times.

VERY interesting! i loved how detailed the poem was understanding the emotion and painting a perfect picture in my mind! thank you for the comment on my poem.
well done!!

mandy