I like it, it has some quality that most can't always capture. Exelent work!

Some people call it a "lifestyle"...others call it a "disorder"....uh huh if im not mistaken i got you figured out. (okay if i really am mistaken then i feel realy stupid) but i just read lots of your poems and you add little hints into your work...like me. do you know what im talking about yet? i think you referred to it as " ana and mia" indeed. well join the club, love. i am in this "disorder" too and i fail over and over and my throat is so raw and my teeth ache like none other and i dont know why im telling you this prolly cause i hold it all it. yes well...goodbye then. (oh yes, mighy great poem)

Thats writen really well, and i feel ur success and wish u all the best god bless * xxx

I'll join you! Another great poem!

Nicely written! 5/5

Very well done, Avellana :), I came to see your works, I'm extremely glad you liked Pain Of One and my work on Porcelain Asylum, especially since you loved one verse especially that was compromised of my lyrical effort in it. 5/5 , your sense of writing gives me inspiration for my lyrics and I'm glad I came here.

Wow. this gave me chills! ah i loved it! this was amazing : )