Hey,
really good poem - like it alot!
however, one thing. it should be too deep, not to deep :P
apart from that loved it alot.. x

I dont know what it is but this poem just hits my heart like a thousand bricks. i love it. it made me tear up and realize that could have been one of us.

Thanks guys.. i have written a lot of poems.. and i've never showed anyone before.. this is like the first time someone other than me has read them.. and thanks for the comment.. i will change that...

OMG!!!....I realli love dis poem, itz great....ttyl...

Wow thats deep..I can relate to that whole thing