Intriguing! The way you craft the scene with your words is enchanting. Such a delight to read, especially these random lines....

"Tangled in endless confusion,
enrobed in the gathering mist"

"When draped in the ashes of silence,"

"grief may wear love`s ardent drape"

Well done! Take care and keep it up~Holly

This is amazing! The scrtucture is great and flows really well.
I love the lines:
"Of a time that is lost and forgotten,
And abandon the dreams of tomorrow"
Very powerful!

Thanks for your advice on how to expand my writing. I used it and wrote a poem called "Brandished Bullet Alongside The Gun"....You can read it whenever you have time!

Keep at it!
Riffy xx

I love the way you write. the style. everything its wonderful.

I love the way you write. the style. everything its wonderful.