Burnout...

by Sean Dohr   Mar 30, 2006


It's hard to gauge all this rage that I feel.
It's hard to cage all this anger that's real.
It's hard to contain all this pain that's inside,
but inside me forever, this pain will reside.

I feel that things around me are moving too fast.
My body is in the future, while my mind's in the past.
Problems from before hurt me now even more.
This isn't just a battle, it's an eternal war.

An internal war that cannot be let out.
A raging fire that will never burnout.
Although, I wish this pain never came,
I refuse to become just another derailed train.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    5/5 definately
    again you've definately evolved in your work but I still like your style and words.
    very original
    ~Wings

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, this was really good. i loved ur use of words and descriptions!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Again, the use of the derailed train. A great metaphor - it shows disaster and creates a feeling of pity towards the poet from the reader. Awesome poem, the first stanza was excellent.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Clarissa

    Good good... nice flow and reely like the title

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    You're right sometimes we can never forget the past or sometimes we get flash backs....so true..I love how your poems are so close to my life!

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