The days of u are right here with me

by ~*im_the_best_at_ruining _my_life*~   Mar 31, 2006


I've felt the touch of an angel
i've felt the warmth of the devils breath upon my neck
you were the one i loved, u were the one who strangled
my life becomes a flawless wreck
i'll bleed to remember the days
can't u see the blood fall from my eyes?
i can still remember your ways
with you in the past i will rise
become my fear ,become my weakness
tears never felt so moist

not yet finished but ....i think it sucks...

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I've felt the touch of an angel
    i've felt the warmth of the devils breath upon my neck

    [When I read this a chill went up my spine..]

    I think it IS finished and you shouldn't touch it.. It's a very good poem.. And I'm really at loss for what else I should say.. But great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    It dosen't stick...it's AWSOME start...why do u repeat the same thing in some of ur poems?write more:)

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