It dosen't stick...it's AWSOME start...why do u repeat the same thing in some of ur poems?write more:)

I've felt the touch of an angel
i've felt the warmth of the devils breath upon my neck

[When I read this a chill went up my spine..]

I think it IS finished and you shouldn't touch it.. It's a very good poem.. And I'm really at loss for what else I should say.. But great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5