Aww that cute. shouldn't 'touch' be 'touches' anyway like i said its cute and i like the rhyme.

When i saw the title of this poem i was expecting a soppy 'i love you' poem so i was pleasantly surprised!! i love the innocence of this poem and the twist at the end is marvellous!! well done and good luck in my contest xx

This is such a cute poem, I love how you ended it, didnt see it coming lol.

--*NaydeeN*

Lol no its not cos ur fourteen...its cos ppl are too dumb to realize that your poems simply rock. i loved this. same geos for me but girlfriend, lol , im a boy

Oooo really good

I used to think that i had a boyfriend that was in my dreams, but when my dream boyfriend became a reality i didn't dream of him anymore. Give it time and he will come

I love this poem

Wow! shocker at the end! I liked this poem...it was kinda repititve to some other poems I've recently read but that's fine I too have a poem like this titled dream boy and I find a lot of simillaritys in this one so thats good nice poem once again

I love the wording it wuz perfect i loved it
it wuz soo great :]