I love him....

by Stephanie   Mar 31, 2006


I love his charm
I love the way he touches my arm
Holds me tight
Through out the dark,cold rainy night
No one can love him more then me
I love him as deep as the sea
He lights up my day
When im down
Nobody else has made me feel this way
Is this love real of fake?
Cuz the more I think about him hurting me....It makes my body ache
I want him to be my one and only
So promise me....
That you will never leave me lonely...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Hmmm you use the '...' just like me haha. this love definitely sounds real to me. this is a good poem, but you can improve it...IE the structure. try to seperate it into rhyming stanzas. I did the same thing as you with my early poems, but you learn that if you split it up, it looks and reads alot better. just a tip coming from me...

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