I think of you, The one for who my love is so true

by Tripp   Mar 31, 2006


Lol i put frick in because it wouldnt let me use other words, so I had to alter my poem...losers

As I recite these lines inside my mind, I think of you
The one for who my love is so true

I may be no Shakespearean poet
And trust me, I definitely do know it

I only hope to get my point across
before our love decays, and becomes covered with moss

But that'll never happen, that I'm sure
Why? because we both love each other, durhh

You're my one and only, my soul mate
Anytime I get to see you, could be considered the perfect date

You are the one to whom I'm devoted
my love for you I've denoted

My friends ask, would you take a bullet for her?
I answer, without out a doubt I am sure

I'm not afraid to hold you around my boys
to prove to them that you aren't just another one of those toys

that other guys masquerade around, treating like property,
when a girl should never be like that, all girls have gotta have their liberty

When I'm around you, everything wrong is turned right
and my outlook on life, is turned on bright

Without you, I would turn to ashes
my heart and mind would be in two consecutive crashes

a terminal velocity collision
the one fatal decision

that would forever end me
cut me deeper than any kukri (which is a knife for those of you who dont know these things...haha)

But that nightmare will never come to fruition
this seems like its a god-given premonition

My point out of all this rhetoric
is to let you know I haven't been with you for ten months just to frick

I love you more than you can ever believe
and I hope that you never leave...

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    You have style my man...I love the slang and down- to-earth manner you right in class. Orginal- maybe a tip would be to watch the syllable count in places because it can tip the rhyme off balance...5/5

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    U hav amazing skill and an even bigger heart than most people i kno...not just guys...people..she is so fortunate to hav u...kinda funny how we r communicating like this..lol...chatting would be o much easier...but this way i get to read a poem and talk to u..i win either way! thx for ur support and im hoping to find a guy that will treat me right..im working on it....hmmmmmm.....
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I lvoe how you mixed being funni towards the beginning with being serious and a REAL MAN "holds his gurl around his boys to show that shes jsut not another toy."

    And its good ot know that ur one of those guys that not wit ur gurl jsut ot frick her...lol no seriously thats awesome..i tell my bf and iu'll tell you there should be more men like you guys...gl with her. :)

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow!! Thats deep...Great writing!! Oh and thnx for the comment!!