by Tripp Mar 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Lol i put frick in because it wouldnt let me use other words, so I had to alter my poem...losers |
You have style my man...I love the slang and down- to-earth manner you right in class. Orginal- maybe a tip would be to watch the syllable count in places because it can tip the rhyme off balance...5/5 |
U hav amazing skill and an even bigger heart than most people i kno...not just guys...people..she is so fortunate to hav u...kinda funny how we r communicating like this..lol...chatting would be o much easier...but this way i get to read a poem and talk to u..i win either way! thx for ur support and im hoping to find a guy that will treat me right..im working on it....hmmmmmm..... |
I lvoe how you mixed being funni towards the beginning with being serious and a REAL MAN "holds his gurl around his boys to show that shes jsut not another toy." |
by Stephanie
Wow!! Thats deep...Great writing!! Oh and thnx for the comment!! |