by Kaylee Mar 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
R_emember when you touched my cheek for the first time? |
by alex
Great poem it woz really wierd |
by David Munoz
Lol spelling a name. nice Idea. Hope you don't mind if I steal it in the future. ;) Excellent poem |
by amber
I liked it great job but i dont know the format i guess i didnt like but every thing else was wonderful |
by littlballa
I love the style of this poem. something i wish i was able to do...i love how the reader can actually feel how you are feeling when oyu wrote this |
by LiL K
Wow, I really like this poem and I wasn't expecting it to end that way, but it was really powerful. You're a wonderful writer and you'll probably go far with those skills :) ...I enjoyed it through and through..I've written a poem like that before, I had it on the site with my last account but I haven't reposted it..maybe I will, I dunno. |