Great Poem, Well Done On Using The Word Robert In There, It's A Great Poem Well Done.

Wow some beautiful imagery in this poem :)
I love it when people dig a little deeper into emotions instead of just scratching the surface

I like this different style, Beautiful

I naver saw that stuff with the lettering before on a poem, very creative :)

This is a creative poem, its really well written, i liked it alot, thankyou
love Tara-Kay

I hate to repeat myself - So, again, amazing poem. Great message, I couldn't exactly call it hidden. . .But, cleverly done all the same. It can be hard to write a poem, knowing the first letter of a line has to be certain.

Peace. [Sole]

Damn...that's beautifully written. Bravo!!!!

Incredible. You have an awsome way with words, really.

Keep writing! XD

Very creative write Kaylee! I enjoyed this, my favorite part was actually the title! The title caught my eye and I love that! You have a terrific way with words! ^^ oh the person above me just said that!
Amazing Job!
Chelsey

Very creative indeed...... it flowed well and was very heartfelt. Beautifully written Kaylee...... great job.

This is great, havent seen poetry done like this in ages. You have such a connection with nature and you bring summer indoors for me. Your poems always linger Kaylee....and you are anything but "invisible"....Great stuff..

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Wow that was a beautiful poem! =) great flow and amazing imagery! I really like the structure of the poem very intersting. You certainly have a way with words! they seem to say so much. I really enjoyed this poem and the title really stands out! this is truely a creative piece! awesome job!

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Very beautiful. The flow is just amazing. great job! keep it up! 5/5*

Wow great job.. im also loving those lines.. it was a very beautiful poem.. your an amazing poet!!! keep writing!!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This was good! Loved how you used his name, Like had the letter for the first word of the line! great job 5/5

luv natalie x0x

Kaylee...I really like the way you expressed yourself in this write.Packed with much emotion. Robert is a lucky man to have someone like you care for him so much.

Awesome Poem, I loved it. you have a nice writting style. Keep up the good work.

Again I am surprised by how very original this poem seemed to me. I saw how you used the letters to start off every other line, and how it was simple yet refined. I loved it.

Wow, I really like this poem and I wasn't expecting it to end that way, but it was really powerful. You're a wonderful writer and you'll probably go far with those skills :) ...I enjoyed it through and through..I've written a poem like that before, I had it on the site with my last account but I haven't reposted it..maybe I will, I dunno.

Anyways, great job on this poem..I absolutely loved it!

I love the style of this poem. something i wish i was able to do...i love how the reader can actually feel how you are feeling when oyu wrote this

I liked it great job but i dont know the format i guess i didnt like but every thing else was wonderful