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  • 18 years ago

    by silent eyes

    I'm not very good with names, so sorry i can't help you with that, I love your poem its so beautifully writen ~silent eyes~

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Hmmmm how about 'Cover up' because she puts on a fake smile....I dont know lol but its still a really good poem!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    I also liked this one.
    I think it's a piece a lot of people especially youngsters could relate to.
    We sometimes are in need to have a listening ear around us, and sometimes it's just not there.
    Good expressed views.

    5/5