I loved this poem!! i can completely relate and i loved the ending...thx for ur comments and i hope to read more from u soon.....
love ya lots,
sore

The mroe i read your poems the more i love every one of them plz keep writing ~silent eyes~

I love this poem because when I was reading it, it made me look back at my childhood for a sec and I realise to myself how often i still do in real life. Especially stanza 6 and 7 are very powerful in explaining the emotion of what see sees, and what she's been through.
And the final stanza is a very powerful one, having a goal for making it last.
Wonderful poem!

5/5