X A Dying Pledge

by Sole   Mar 31, 2006


Windy, stormy, flowing through
The seven storey tower block
Freezing cold, my hands turn blue
As people stand and stare in shock.

My hair, streaming in the gale
My feet curl over the edge
Abulance's sirens wail
As I make my dying pledge

I promise not to fall in vain
I have a reason, understand
No longer can I feel, but pain
Theres no-one here to hold my hand

Spread my arms, prepare to fly
Tilt my head and watch the floor
Rise towards me, I'm ready to die
And I'll be in peace forever more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    Oh my gosh! This is a very touching poem! It almost made me cry!

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Amazing poem, the flow was great. Each line was so beautiful! Awesome work, take care 5/5
    Polly x

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The imagery was pretty great and the flow was well amazing. I love how the lines seemed to fit so well together.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    This is difently very sad. an emotional, yet heartfelt piece that really speaks to me.

    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Such an emotional piece, great job, keep writing and take care sarah x

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