This reminds me of the placebo vid. for pure morning

I like this poem...although its sad its still nice, i'm not quite sure y!
i rili like the,

"I promise not to fall in vain
I have a reason, understand
No longer can I feel, but pain
Theres no-one here to hold my hand"

bit..but i supose thts cuz i can relate, great work, 5/5, jesxxx

This is really sad, but its good too. keep it up
xxxxxx

Very nice by the way. I liked how you kept each line around the same length and each one of them had the same flow, very even. I enjoyed the last stanza very much. It was a great peice of work , keep it up.

Great stuff, I look foreward to reading more of your poems.. Very good structure you have in your poems =)
Xx 5/5

Very well written Peice of poetry. I loved it. The Rhyme and Flow is great. Amazing Job.

~Joe~

Hiya,

I've read a few of your poems.. (but haven't commented on the others!) just want to say, reading your poems makes me feel.. whats the word.. real.. that must be it.

Loved this poem, I just had to read it again... and again.. (and again!)

Cheers,
Laterz,
Shirlz.

Such an emotional piece, great job, keep writing and take care sarah x

This is difently very sad. an emotional, yet heartfelt piece that really speaks to me.

Kat

The imagery was pretty great and the flow was well amazing. I love how the lines seemed to fit so well together.

Amazing poem, the flow was great. Each line was so beautiful! Awesome work, take care 5/5
Polly x

Oh my gosh! This is a very touching poem! It almost made me cry!