That is really good... Keep on writting the poems you are really good

Brilliantly written - very sad.

Cause the girl I see
Will always have a blank stare
I know...Cause the girl is me

I think that 'Cause' should be turned to 'Because' - It's a little more formal and 'cause' ruins the formality, depth and sadness of the poem. Other than that - it was a great poem, really made me think, and see through your eyes a little.

Peace. [Sole]

What and ending!!

"Will always have a blank stare
I know...Because the girl is me"

This issue is always something that deeply saddens me and your pain was so evident here; changing the voice in this poem had a powerful effect....great!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Aw... i hope that you are ok.. & i really hope this isn't true, but it probably is. I'm really sorry. Some people are just really cruel in this world but you really shouldn't turn to self harm...maybe talk to somebody? I know you must be growing through alot. I hope you feel better. Stay Strong!!

Im sorry ta hear what heppend to you if this is true
honstly ive been there to! he didnt get a chance ta rape me cuz i faught him off
but i hope things are getting better for you n you have put the blade way
life will get better if you look ta the brighter side of things
good luck
much love
always alana

Wow. What an amazing piece I apologize for not getting to your request sooner but I knida broke my computer literally and I've been trying to find this thread and just found it I wanted to you to know that I didn't forget! k back to the poem this is such an emotional poem it refelcts the pain the aftermath of rape and abuse... Great flow and rhythm.. Very sad poem but brilliant! Awesome job =)

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Id just like to say that it was a very meaning ful poem that i think alot of us can relate too...i hope everything gets better for u....

Oh, I know exactly how you feel.I was raped two years ago by my best friend.And ignore it when people say "I hope you can forget it"Because you can't it is impossible to forget something that painful.Even after two years I can't sleep well.And even worse I don't believe in Abortions,but my mother forced me to get one,to me its like murdering.I hope in time you can accept whats happened and live a happy life.My words probably wont help much but It is worth a try.

Kitten101

WoW
O.O

I have already commented this one, a while ago, but reading it again, made me see it was perfect. i loved it this time more than i did then

This poem brought me to tears...beautifully written--

Stay Strong and much love to you-