Comments : A Beautiful Escape

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow that was a powerful poem...you really sealed it at the end with the last stanza. Good write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I agree with Anna

    I'll never open up to the world,
    only the skin on my wrist.

    Very powerful lines.

    Nice writing.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Gothic Princess

    Simply amazing...something that I can REALLY relate to, being a reformed cutter I know the pain and misery, also from attempting suicide, but your poem spoke the truth and it holds something in my heart...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow. this is...amazing. and i connect to it so well. and i've also had thoughts of suicide. classmates' words hurt so much...
    5/5
    lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Powerful my friend. A magnificent piece!

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Fantastic......gr8 write...
    loved it dear! 5/5 of course........

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffanny

    Simply amazing. it really got to me. great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Left me speechless!
    What a wonderful poem.

    I love this conversation inside of your head, with the questions. Made it so emotional. And so real!

    Very well done!

    Lotsaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, sad and powerful. The last line was just perfect, very well written!

  • Omg im in tears that was so heart felt and powerfull your a beautiful writer i hope your gonna b ok xoxox
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    My favorite line in this poem is "I hurt myself so no one can". 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by pathetic

    This was a beautiful poem. i loved it,! its really deep.

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Woh !dude it was a really powerful poem!! I could relate to some of the things you said! so how could i get to hear some of your music im into rock so im interested in listening to new music well anyways your poem was gr8t! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    That is really good, and I can defiently relate to where you are comming from...

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. So sad!! I loved it 5/5 keep it up =]

    luv natalie x-x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Azure :)

    That is really emotional and is really powerful you are a gr8 writer god bless you * xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by katee

    I loved this poem too. It shows so much power in each word. I liked the 4th stanza the best. You're an awesome poet, so you better keep up the good work. ^_^ ^_~

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that poem is so sad.. I hope that you don't really feel that way. Things always get better and writing about them is such a great release of emotions. I love the line "I hurt myself so no one can", that was very powerful. You did a great job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Honestly, I don't like it when people cut themselves, blood and just everything about it makes me feel sick, but once again, I was left speechless after reading this poem... great great job!! i loved it... like anna said way back at the top of your list of comments for this one, the 4th stanza was very stong, it was amazingly written!

    **meggie**

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    That was really sad but very well written. Your poetry must be well liked lol having this many comments...but you deserve it...great job!