by Laura
Wow that was a powerful poem...you really sealed it at the end with the last stanza. Good write! 5/5 |
by Sole
I agree with Anna |
Simply amazing...something that I can REALLY relate to, being a reformed cutter I know the pain and misery, also from attempting suicide, but your poem spoke the truth and it holds something in my heart... |
by Lauren
Wow. this is...amazing. and i connect to it so well. and i've also had thoughts of suicide. classmates' words hurt so much... |
by Simon Hayes
Powerful my friend. A magnificent piece! |
by PURE HEART
Fantastic......gr8 write... |
by tiffanny
Simply amazing. it really got to me. great poem 5/5 |
by Mona
Left me speechless! |
by Melissa
Wow, sad and powerful. The last line was just perfect, very well written! |
Omg im in tears that was so heart felt and powerfull your a beautiful writer i hope your gonna b ok xoxox |
My favorite line in this poem is "I hurt myself so no one can". 5/5 |
by pathetic
This was a beautiful poem. i loved it,! its really deep. |
Woh !dude it was a really powerful poem!! I could relate to some of the things you said! so how could i get to hear some of your music im into rock so im interested in listening to new music well anyways your poem was gr8t! 5/5 |
by Colby
That is really good, and I can defiently relate to where you are comming from... |
by Natalie
This was really good. So sad!! I loved it 5/5 keep it up =] |
by Azure :)
That is really emotional and is really powerful you are a gr8 writer god bless you * xxxx |
by katee
I loved this poem too. It shows so much power in each word. I liked the 4th stanza the best. You're an awesome poet, so you better keep up the good work. ^_^ ^_~ |
by Bridgette
Aww.. that poem is so sad.. I hope that you don't really feel that way. Things always get better and writing about them is such a great release of emotions. I love the line "I hurt myself so no one can", that was very powerful. You did a great job on this! |
by Meggie33
Honestly, I don't like it when people cut themselves, blood and just everything about it makes me feel sick, but once again, I was left speechless after reading this poem... great great job!! i loved it... like anna said way back at the top of your list of comments for this one, the 4th stanza was very stong, it was amazingly written! |
by Always4You
That was really sad but very well written. Your poetry must be well liked lol having this many comments...but you deserve it...great job! |