Great poem! I loved it! I can really relate with the lines "That was the truth for I still love you and you no longer love me." and "I will carry my love for you till God calls me home". I feel the same way about a guy who broke my heart...love sure sucks, doesn't it? ;) jk. Keep up the good work! Much love, Ashley

1st of all thats a very well written poem, its great and i loved it. well i like the part you said "I will carry my love for you till GOD calls me home" that part was nice. like they always say love hurts, right?
keep up the great work

What a beautiful penned you've done here, well expressed emotion...and thanks for your beautiful comment anyway....keep writing, take care.

love
gloria's glen

"till God calls me home"
amazing piece!!
I know the feeling hun!
hope things turn out for the best!!
keep writing and never give up =)
thanx for the lovely comment!meant alot
Best Of luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Excellent write, very heartfelt.
Thanks for your comment.

What a beautiful p0em! i kn0w what its like t0 l0se s0me0ne y0u l0ve, it tears y0u up inside. i have l0st many pe0ple, m0stly fr0m death th0ugh. earlier this year i l0st 6 0f my cl0se friends which just t0re my up inside. i wr0te a c0uple 0f p0ems ab0ut it, my fav0urite is Forever y0ung ;x if y0u want t0 check it 0ut.
i l0ve all 0f y0ur p0ems, y0u have al0t 0f talent and i feel f0r y0ur l0ss. keep up the great writing!
l0ve maddy x0ox

LOving your work HUN!
Great poem and excellent piece of work!
Take care
xx

I'm really feelin this one tammi!

I love reading this poem because it reminds me so much of how i feel right now. Thanks for the inspiration, nd for the comment! :]
take care

This is such a beautiful poem...I know how u feel...its hard and don't know why when u gave all ur love and they just leave...so I can relate...enjoy reading ur poems I hope to read more soon...