Again, this is soo sweet! i love it.
and whoever she is, shes damn lucky to have a guy like you

Aww hunny.. beautiful poem i loved every word.. u've painted such a wonderful piece.. keep it up!
ash is right, she is truly lucky..
lots of love,
lostlllsoul

I love it. =) You're a great writer.
P.S you look cute. Lol.

Love, Grace

Heart filled poem..full of passion...calling out your lover ....beautiful stanza's...good rythme....keep up the good work 5/5 check out my latest "MY TEARS" "I AM" " gifts of sorrow thank you for voting and commenting

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
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