This is a lovely idea, and a brilliant poem!
Personaly i dont have major issues to write about, only when my mind is confused, but i can easily imagine the subject of this, and can realy feel this poem.

Well lets hope your pen never runs dry, hopefully to carry on after any troubles pass.

Jon
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This is a lovely idea, and a brilliant poem!
Personaly i dont have major issues to write about, only when my mind is confused, but i can easily imagine the subject of this, and can realy feel this poem.

Well lets hope your pen never runs dry, hopefully to carry on after any troubles pass.

Jon
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Hey.. great idea, original. As Jon said, hope the ink in ur pen never runs dry, troubles may pass, scars may heal, but writing is a great way of release. Good job hun. I love the poem.

Monique xoxo

...but what happens when you have nothing left to release?! that's what i've been asking myself lately... anyways, thank you guys soo much for your comments :D they mean a lot!!
peace, -xXx-

I love the last stanza! and when you have nothing left to release i guess you write bout other stuff you no like what happens in society xxx

This sounds oddly famliar, and couldnt have come at a better time lol. I love it Fighter. You are a true poet. never give it up. ever. or I'll slap you lol

Love the last stanza!!!

Jenn

Wow, this is an amazing poem. it has a really powerful meaning, and was beautifully written! good work! and thanku for the comment, it means a lot,
take care,
xxEmmaxxx

Wow great poem you might not remember me but i got ur comment u box too that way cool. 5/5

WOW a definate 5/5 i wish i could vote higher... i loved this poem sooo much! and i hope you keep writing... im definatly adding you to my favourites :D!
anyway 5/5 always and thanks alot for the comment, i'll always return the favour :)!

I agree with eric, i wish i could give this a 10/5, i really do. this is such a beautiful poem. this poem means alot to me, as i feel i can relate to it. i had a tough year last year, and writing was my release throughout it. Although i've never had much skill, my poems always contained real emotion, and for me, thats why i liked them. as things have improved in my life, i firstly find i have less need to write, although i still enjoy it, i feel no crushing pressure that forces me to write, because those emotions that made me feel as if i was going to explode are alittle more subdued. secondly, i've found that becuase there isn't so much emotion going into my poems, they are becoming obscure and cold! still....i persist :P

anyway, back to the point, i adore this poem. it's really special, and i hope you'll always keep writing, because you have too much talent no too.

xXx

Wow, this poem is amazing. I absolutely loved it, and can't wait to read more of your work.

Probably the best poem I've read in awhile.

Thanks so much for all your comments/support in the past. As you can see I kind of cleaned out my site.

Well, thanks again!
Keep writing.

I really liked this. The expressions, the feelings you lifted to the surface, were amazing. I could really feel the emotions. I liked its progressoin through the poem, and how the ending came down easily, but as a big impact. I loved it. Great Job.

This is one of them poems, what makes the reader think more about whats being said (instead of what's being written!) great piece...

Keep 'em coming fighter
jm

Amazing, I think that this is one of those poems that almost all poets can relate to.. the need to write that is so strong it consumes everything else. Wonderful I loved it. 5/5