Omg this is sad!!! all i can say is wow...5/5

As much i ahte to say this i get every word of this poem from experience is wonderful good work

Aw this poem is so sad!! It almost made me cry! I loved it though & i love the ending..how sad it was.. but knowing that the boy was in a better place made it better. Great job on this. 5/5*

That's such a nice and sad poem! A 5 year old boy shouldn't ever have to go through that. Great job, 5/5

Really powerfull! good work!

Wow this poem started strong and ended strong.. I loved it from the beginning to the end. It's a poem about the reality of not only the little boy you portray in your poem but of many other kids... Very emotional and the ending was awesome. Amazing job!

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Hey! I saw your post on the request forums that said 12 for 20. I don't think that I will have the time to do 12, so I didn't bother putting my name on the list, but I did want to come read atleast some of your poems. So far I can tell you're really good and write from the heart - which is something I always look for when reading anyones poem. The only real problem I saw was a slight spelling error, (which doesn't really count, because it doesn't change the poetry at all, but I thought I'd tell you anyway.) The word ''those'' is spelled with just one 's' . lol I don't mean to be rude, but I do know that people like to be alerted when there's something that could use changing, so I point out spelling and grammar alot. Anyway, great poem. Very sad though :(.
Off to read a few more now, hopefully they're all as good as this one :) -Stefhy

Wahh.. every poem makes me cry! haha.. your work is excellent, i love it! this poem was especially sad.. you bring your emotions thru in words so well! 5/5
jesy

Hiya! You won one of the prizes in my contest, it was great!
You are an excellent writer, Meaghen!

This is well written. Very sad. It breaks my heart that children have to go through stuff like this from their parents. God bless you.

Oh, what do I say??? Really very very well written!! This poem not only chocked me up, but it also made me really think about the young children in our society. Thanks for such a good poem!