by Chelline
It was really good i liked it alot!! |
by katie
Omg your poem is really great 5/5 check my poems out hunni yours are phemonal |
by Ruby K P
Hey there. I took a very long break from this website, only to return to find that your poems have gotten even better. Really love it, keep up the brilliant work sweet. xxx |
by Gabbi
Wow. thats amazing |
That\'s a very interesting poem...I like it...especially the title...very nice...hope to read more. |
by shannon
Thats is a great poem! i know how hard it is to live in a lie...you are a great writer. |
by Justin G
Wow thats deep, but remember not all guys are like that..it happens but there is always someone better than that waitin for u to wise up and make a better descision. |
by lilia
Thats was beautiful and very sad at the same time. awsome job hun loved it alot!!! keep it up. check out my poems if you get a chance |
by jennifer
Your poem was really good i liked it alot! |
by TYNDA
Wow this one is sooo good! keep up the good work |
by Krissy
This is a great poem. Its one that makes you really think I like it tho its sad. great poem 5/5 |
Love it i can deffinitly tell everyone else dose to. ur a great writer and could go far if u want. make ur wishes come true and follow ur dreams and theyll come to you. |
by Johnny
Wow very interesting story...i like i like...keep up the good work |
by cLumsy
Breath-taking. A story of life of many wove into a powerful true tale of broken wretched love. Truth lies regretfully and Faithfulness is forever true. Sorrow breeds in these households. Thank you for portraying this, because the woman in this poem is a fierce battler of love. |
by DeepSoul
Oh gosh babe! this made me tear up! it's so sad! and yet... i love it! hee hee! you are so good at this! and don't you dare lie to yourself by saying you're not! cuz you are so awesome at this! keep writing! well, i'll talk to you soon! much luv~Kim |
by hopeless08
This poem is great. I really like your poetry. Keep writing b/c I'd love to read more. |
Man shes crazy i wouldve said something.. well 5/5 keep up the work |
by kallie
Omgosh!! this is written perfectly!! i love the way you wrote it out!! its a sad topic but written beautifully! |
Awesome poem i loved it!! |
Great poem there... It's real too... in spme people's lives... Good job.. Keep it up! |