by Jon Hunt Mar 31, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
***Yes this is a story,a short one, if anyone has any issuses with the posting of a story then tell me, but i apply the same thought and such to stories as i do to poems, so i like to think of them on the same level*** |
Wow....you continue to amaze me Mr Jon. Whether its songs, prose or poetry it just dazzles me....I want to read on....is there any more? |
This is very good, don't read many short stories but i like this one a lot. very well written with good use of description, and full of interest. |
by Monique
Ok.. wow. the words flowed very well together.. i dont like short stories.. tehy are so boring, but I enjoyed this one.:) You have a way with words babe. Good job. |
by Stephenie
You are a beautiful writer, I wish i had the skills as you do, your words portray such beautiful imagery, |