You are a beautiful writer, I wish i had the skills as you do, your words portray such beautiful imagery,

keep up the good work

Ok.. wow. the words flowed very well together.. i dont like short stories.. tehy are so boring, but I enjoyed this one.:) You have a way with words babe. Good job.

Monique xoxo

This is very good, don't read many short stories but i like this one a lot. very well written with good use of description, and full of interest.

5/5

Wow....you continue to amaze me Mr Jon. Whether its songs, prose or poetry it just dazzles me....I want to read on....is there any more?

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