Gd poem i did try the websote but u have to be in america and im not.

Soz i've read it properly now, this poem is superb so descriptive and so full of life just like a phionix. did u do that on porpose? its great i love it. 5/5

Cascading from the luster pearls
Of the deafening air
Crack, roars the thunder
Crash, goes the water's waves
.....
The legend of myth
Descends from the sky
Bringing straight behind
A mellow lullaby

wow. i'm breathless. Rainy, this is amazing! brilliant! i could see it all happening in my mind. those were my fav parts. i loved it. i'm sorry i havent read any poems in so long...but...my god....you get better everytime i read one...and its just so...breathtaking.

*gasps in awe as a phoenix rises in glory*

looovee you rainy, beautiful!

Awesome last line . . . Great poem. I could really picture the phoenix in my mind as I read through your poem. Beautiful.

Peace. [Sole]

Gr8 poem very awesum..5/5 congrats again on gettin 1st in my contest. ur a gr8 poet!
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Wow, there were some amazing words there...
This poem created such detailed pictures in my mind!
You aced it!
Jen
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