I like it, it has a good message but i dont think you should abbreviate 'why are' in the first line, it has a better rhytmn if you use 'why are you' instead of 'why're you'

and the title would be better without the "s - just 'to the silent stranger'

i dont mean to be so petty but small changes can make a big difference!

xxx

Shes right small things can make the biggest difference.

i got the message it was a good write flow a lil off no biggie 4/5

~GLASS~

I like the concept of the poem... You just have to improve on the content. All you have to do is explain more about the person maybe or how the person makes you feel -- Just add in a few changes and it will be great.. But good attempt and its good you had the guts to post this poem anyways to get feedback =) good job ;)

--emotionless.19*

I liked it but i thought maybe more of a rhyme would help and maybe make it longer? just some thoughts..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I loved the main idea of the poem but the flow was thrown off in a few places. You might want to add more heartfelt meaningful words.... Everyone loves a poem with beautiful words! But anyways i liked your original idea for this poem! And I liked this line the best!

so my dear you're sitting
there thinking of me
so how about coming
and talking to me.

The concept is good, but the flow felt throw off in places. I can't really explain where though, sorry. I think if you'd gone in depth emotionally by looking in yourself or how it would feel from the silent stranger's or your own different point of view :)

The ambuity of this silent stranger really kept the poem moving...I would have liked to know a bit more about this silent stranger. The last lines through me off a bit and parts were confusing at times...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I love the detail and expression! go poonam!