by LadyPearl Apr 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
What beauty lies in Thy eyes |
by Fixxxer
I love the imagery you use.. very unique, expressive, and touching. |
This was a very beautiful poem but I didnt really understand what was going on in it to well. |
by Bridgette
This is really good! It is very sweet. You had a different choice of words rather than what I'm used to seeing but it made the poem great. I loved it. Great job! 5/5** |
by Leann
Thank you for your comment. i genuinly appreciate your advice. |
by Sarah Ann
Oh wow I loved this. The rhyming made the poem fit so well together like perfect pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, waiting to become a masterpiece. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5 |