This is amazing, for some reason I thought I was shakespeare, I was that well crafted. You have a way with the style of lauguage, its intricate, graceful, complex...and really romantic... Excellent...

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Someone has been doing to much Romeo and Juliet! haha. That was fabulous, Noni! And,I might add, one good poem you have written that isn't dark! Congrats! lol

Amazing poem, but I've learned not to expect less from you. I think it was organized really well and I lke the in response to seperate the two stanza's. I don't know any suggestions because it's just too beautiful as it is.

Masterpiece

5.5 amazing loved it. keep it up

thanks for sharing

"But such beauty can't die in waste" - that line caught my eye, I'm not sure why
I like the idea of a comment and a reply poem, it kind of rounds it off much better
The language in the poem was well used and added to the overall effect
Well done :)

Nice poem. i love the rhyme.

im not sure if you meant this but isnt "without no end" a double negative implying that there is an end?
maybe you did it on purpose and im not insightful enough.

i love the second half. it just speaks to me more. nice job

Oh wow I loved this. The rhyming made the poem fit so well together like perfect pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, waiting to become a masterpiece. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5

Thank you for your comment. i genuinly appreciate your advice.
And beautifully written poem.

This is really good! It is very sweet. You had a different choice of words rather than what I'm used to seeing but it made the poem great. I loved it. Great job! 5/5**

This was a very beautiful poem but I didnt really understand what was going on in it to well.

I love the imagery you use.. very unique, expressive, and touching.
you're a great writer :)