The Beginning of a Battle

by Poetvoices   Apr 1, 2006


I can see it, but she can't.
Blind to what's before her eyes.
She won't let the boy in
no matter how hard he tries.

I hope his efforts won't be wasted.
He's too perfect for her.
She keeps pushing him out,
but she's his perfect girl.

He tries to keep it secret,
but lovers cannot hide.
With this other guy in the picture,
it didn't take her long to decide.

He's not best for her, but I'll shut up.
I don't want her mad at me,
but I can see what's good for her
beyond what she can see.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joey

    Wow! really terrific poem! =D loved it alot, keep writing ;-), 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey there kris!!! well you'll have 2 out run ME!!!!! *grins* awww Kris ur so awesome! u just know when to comment and wat 2 say :) It must b our holy spirit bond *grins* u have no idea how much that meant 2 me. ANYWAZE... GREAT POEM MY LOVE! beautiful and it had meaning. keep wriitng cause u weren't 4 a while ther eand I almost died *tear* catch u l8er hun *hugs* ruthie xoxo