Wow... a short poem. but it has such impact... its sad... but makes you think about what people do and y they do it...

well done!!!

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Jacs
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Shoet poem but a hard hitter, great job! 5/5

A strong and moving piece about an issue that is strong in the eyes of many people. Powerful and emotional, this piece shows your feelings admirably. With a nice design and good flow, definitely a piece i enjoyed reading. Well Done

Wow, this was a short but strong piece! a very widely discussed topic explained in a very unthought of point of view. and this is the one i agree to! luvd it!
nuff luv x