Wonderful love poem. especiall loved these lines:

My mine and soul are wrapped
My heart beats in time with yours.

you might want to check for punctuation errors - this site substitutes something else instead of them!

good luck and peace
shobhana

Absolutely beautiful! What a lucky lady :)
I have only read 2 of your poems & already I can tell I really like the way you write-- from the heart :) I will be reading more for sure!
Take care

This was really beautiful, shes very lucky to have someone so devoted to her. great write.

Omg, that was so cute...nice work.
And thx for the comment. I'm working on letting go...although it's proving to be alot harder than I thought...but yeah.

Thanks for your comment on mine. Lol. I think that is such a cute poem!!. Lol. keep writing. it's so sweet.
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I thought this poem was really sweet and I just liked it. Thanks for ur comment. Jpoet*