by mechelle skillin Apr 1, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
You can become the one. |
Beautiful poem, I loved how you made it almost a story. Written eloquently with strength. 5/5 |
by Synh
It's a nice poem but your lines kinda run into each other. Fix the structure and it'll be excellent |
by Natalie
This was a good. Had a good meaning to it aswell. I think in the 6th line though, You might have meant 'Difference' Instead of different. Im not sure. But great poem. Really like it! 5/5 |
by Richard
Oh wow |
by MemoirsOfMe
It had a great meaning, and the message was clearly great. Though, I must say, the poem went a little slowly and I did have to read a few lines over again. The flow wasn't as nice as it could be. But I thought you did a great job in expressing and making your point... and that is a great poet. Keep it up! |