Becoming the one

by mechelle skillin   Apr 1, 2006


You can become the one.
The one who see it all
the one who becomes stronger than as all
You have to follow your dreams
Tell people how you think
You are going to be the one to make a different
The one to show as the way
You were the chosen one
now walk down the path that was made for you
You know what you have to do
Now go and do it
Show the world your the one who is the strongest of than all
Your the one who will lead us to the light once again
You are the one even though ever one doesn't believe in you
You are going to become something wonderful
Now go out into the world and show everyone your spirit and soul can take you to whatever your heart wants
Shame on the world if they can't see how wonderful you are
because you are the world's worst fear because you will never give up even when you fall you will get right back up and show ever one i am here and if you think i am just going to give up you have another think coming at you because i am here to stay
i became the one
Now you go and become the one with me and all the other people who know the world better be ready for us

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Beautiful poem, I loved how you made it almost a story. Written eloquently with strength. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    It's a nice poem but your lines kinda run into each other. Fix the structure and it'll be excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was a good. Had a good meaning to it aswell. I think in the 6th line though, You might have meant 'Difference' Instead of different. Im not sure. But great poem. Really like it! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    Oh wow

    the message of this poem is really strong
    i really liked reading it
    and my eyes weidened
    as i read each line

    its amazing 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    It had a great meaning, and the message was clearly great. Though, I must say, the poem went a little slowly and I did have to read a few lines over again. The flow wasn't as nice as it could be. But I thought you did a great job in expressing and making your point... and that is a great poet. Keep it up!