Really good but sad poem =( you are talented

Thats sweet and sad, you're really good at writing, keep it up ^^

This is a great poem. Very sad and emotional. You have a wonderful talent. and thanks for commenting on mine :)

Wow this is a really good poem. it conveys a story as well.. a sad one at that.. ur a gd writer.. keep it up.. xxshellxx

Wow, This was really good. I loved the last stanza! Keep it up hun x-x

luv natalie

P.s Thank you oh soo much for the comment =]

My. thats so sad, but just so powerful and strong. how you portrayed the story. with such emotion within it.

Kat

Omg. so emotional..so AMAZING! keep writing!! never stop!!

wow wow wow

lonelynow xxx

Hey this is a very sad poem and i must admit that u hv xpressed ur felings very well here.

all the best and take care
5/5

Aw that was so sad. very well written. 5/5*

It's so sad =( Loving someone so much that you literaly can't bear to live without them. it's a great poem though, really great rythm and story to it. i loved it. good job

Another fabulous poem!
I loved it
You defiantely deserve a high rating for this one
5/5
Love
~Em

WOW........this poem is sooo good, ur very talented at writing poetry, this poem left me speechless....well keep up the good writing 5/5
Jennifer

Really great one, flowed perfectly and was just beautiful!

That was really good . i loved the way it rhymed in some parts. COOL ! well check out some of my poems if you get the chance ..... later

That was a really good poem.. i enjoy all of your poems your an amazing writer... thank you for the comment... maybe check out my other poem.. this poem is definately a 5/5

That was an amazing poem...I loved it...very intense..keep it up.
5/5
Breanna

Thats sad but sween at the same time...*confused look* ur great at writing though and showing the reader the emotion ur feeling...keep it up! 5/5

Your poems read like stories, that happens to be my favorite style. excellent write