He's forced to pretend..
To tell his parents lies..
Say he has friends..
When at night he cries..

That is so horrible! Not the way you wrote it that is perfectly fine! But I know of some people who are like that and that just broke my heart to have to read! So I REALLY LOVED the first part of this...especailly the part where you mention the dad being a high school stud and then his son being treated like mud....but I may be the only one who feels this way but I'd like to be honest,, the ending...there was something about it....its cool you ended it like that I end many of my poems that way too I enjoyed it but I think the last two stanzas occured to soon, like I was reading it and getting teary eyed then BAM the kid jumped off the roof..haha sorry I bet I'll be the only one who thinks that way just wanted to say my opinon...Over all Luke I will not down rate you because I really enjoyed this and you still get a 5 from me! Keep it up this was great!
Chelsey-Lynn
P.S....dear God I hope this was a made-up story

Omg i totally love this poem its so true like the stuff in the poem is really true!!!