by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Apr 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I miss you |
Very powerfully expressive piece of writting. only fault ii found was that the word "your" in line 2 of the 4th stanza should be "you're". other than that there are no faults that i could see. the structure and flow are great and the content amazingly powerfully protryed. |
by Sophi[e]
That is truely amazing. Incredibly touching... a true inspiration. Although if these are your feelings, i'm sure you'd rather have them taken away than write a great poem? -take care- |
A great, deep and meaningful p0em. i l0ve it! that is exactly the way i feel with my ex, i can relate t0 this p0em s0 much! 5/5! keep up the go0d w0rk |
by shahadah
That was so cute, it remind me of my ex boyfriend!!!!! so deep and emotional |
by Azure :)
I love your poem, its writen really well and lovely choice of words, god bless you * xxxxx |