This feeling..

by x0SilenTxWisH0x   Apr 1, 2006


Looking out the window, feeling so hopeless and low,
With your unclear shadows..

Wish you could be here, and erase all my senseless fear,
I know you can make them clear..

I don’t know where you are,
Drinking in a bar, or looking at the stars, just hope you are not that far..

Even if I want to share, even when I try not to care,
There’s just something that I couldn't bear, cause for us, life is too unfair..

You said everything was fine, but still cant get it off my mind..
This strange feeling, wonder what’s its kind, I think only u can help me find..

Want to dance n sing, specially expressing this weird feeling to my baby boo...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    The way some words were cut out kind of confused me, but I managed to get it.
    I thought the imagery was good.
    The flow was off in a couple places, but apart from that I think you did a wonderful job.