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by x0SilenTxWisH0x Apr 1, 2006 category : Love, romance / cyber love
Looking out the window, feeling so hopeless and low, With your unclear shadows.. Wish you could be here, and erase all my senseless fear, I know you can make them clear.. I don’t know where you are, Drinking in a bar, or looking at the stars, just hope you are not that far.. Even if I want to share, even when I try not to care, There’s just something that I couldn't bear, cause for us, life is too unfair.. You said everything was fine, but still cant get it off my mind.. This strange feeling, wonder what’s its kind, I think only u can help me find.. Want to dance n sing, specially expressing this weird feeling to my baby boo...
by Jenni Marie
I liked this. The way some words were cut out kind of confused me, but I managed to get it. I thought the imagery was good. The flow was off in a couple places, but apart from that I think you did a wonderful job.