Survival

by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~   Apr 1, 2006


I watch the rain fall
suddenly time stands still
everything will be alright
if I just take one more pill

Everyone thinks I'm lucky
Just because Ive fallen in love
that powerful feeling which I lost
Wishing someone would give me my last shove

"You'll get over him,
You'll find someone better"
My friends all chanted
While I explained myself in a letter

I cant be happy
I just want to die
This all happened
Because of one guy

He said he loved me
I shouldve just said NO
My heart believed what he said
And this I will never let go

There is just too much hurt
So much pain and tears
its better that hes at least happy
While Im here with all my nightmares and fears

Friends always said that Id find someone different
But Ive waited a year and no one has come
I just want to let go of that feeling he made
I wish I could just let my heart go numb

Over time and help from everyone
I found reason to live and to dream
My heart let go of loves curse
I got to go I have bliss to redeem

~~ if it looks familiar, good, cuz i put two of my poems together to create one. i added more details. and i do believe this one is way beter.
(c) *Death* is on my Side*-*
this poms getting published. look for it in the book immortal verses!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This poem was very well written . I like
    the way you wrote it in so much detail
    and still was able to stay on the topic .

    I believe a congradulation is due to
    you on your publication of this piece of
    work .

    I'm looking forward to reading more of
    your poetry after I read one of each of
    the members, because I've been away
    so long .

    Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to
    add you to my favorites so that I won't
    forget to read more of your work .

    Hugs
    Letty....

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    You reminded me of what happened to me.
    I don't really want to remember it, but it made me loose apart of me....... Great job........ ;..( 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    I liked that a lot...It was really good! Keep it up:D 5/5!!
    ~Always4You~

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this poem, i can relate to it well. Well done, very well written
    xxxxxxx

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