Nicely done specially da part of another bandage aound my heart. 5/5

Its awesome, well done
xxxxxxx

Good poem, nice rhyme scheme and flow but i think it's a bit to short though :S i don't know why lol

~StefQ

This poem is so good! i loved it. i can definitely relate to it. great job! 5/5*

Short sweet, with a slang " I say it like it is" feel....watch out for the spelling of "brake", I thnk you mean "break"

[lostlaureate- come find me]

"Another bandage around my heart"

I found this so cute...this is should be in the sad poem section. Nice rhyme and beautiful pace...I liked it..

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow, that was powerful, sad, and very inspirational! loved it.. the flow was great and i really loved how you were sad but very firm and determined at the same time!

I'm leaving now to start a new
Turn away and start a new
^ in these lines, it should be "anew' not "a new" hehe..

excellent write! 5/5

Very harsh, yet i see where you are coming from with the poem. It is very well writen and they have the only corrections covered above already.

5/5, glad i could read it!

I can relate to this a lot! It was very well written. Good rhyme and flow.
My favorite line was "Another bandage around my heart" I don't know why, but I just love it. Great job! 5/5

Another great job! poem is wonderful keep it up !

Honestly?
I have to admit.
This wasn't all that bad.
I think this was the best I've read from you.
5/5

"For all the things you never say"

I love how we as humans can be bothering by things that aren't there..its almost mind boggling..I love this poem thing..goodbyes are the hardest part but the most important to recovery..keep up the great work!

Great poem.. well written, and really good flow.. love it.. keep up the good work 5/5

Love it. 5/5

And again, I really like this one. You do very good work that many people can relate to.