The title was really attention getting. I think it is what makes the poem stand out the most. I think your strongest lines were:
I picture you in my mind,
And your image starts to fade.
and I think your weakest lines were:
It all seemed way too good.
Yet in the end it turned out bad.
Also you say you're still in love yet the image starts to fade. That could just be something else but if you love someone truly I think you would forever try and keep their image with you. I noticed how young you say you are, and it's really a great poem for somebody your age to write. It seemed like a bunch of thoughts and emotions. Must have been important for you to write

The intensity in this poem for your age is very good. I can see that you put together a bunch of feelings and emotion, and made it into this one huge masterpiece. It was an excellent poem! Keep it up. xxx

Oh mi gosh ur way way way betta dan me @ writin poems!! keep it up!!
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I really really REALLY liked it! lol It had a great flow to it!! You have a lot of talent! Great job!

Omg, this poem's awesome!!! keep up the good work!! :)