Comments : Will I ever find you?

  • 18 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Sexy poem gota love it

    Love Dean xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    Hey there,
    I like this poem! i give you 5/5 and yeah well if you have time you should check out my poems! Well gotz to go! Great poem!

    Much Love Always,
    Cindy

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Not bad for a first poem next time try a rhyme scheme and verses i've found it's easier to construct your thought and rhyme them better in verses