Mall

by PS   Apr 2, 2006


So i went to the mall today
and let me tell you what i saw
pretty dresses with no backs
three icecream cups for 8 bucks

a super trooper with a black hat
walking into payless shoes
a parade of squealing little girls
with unfortunate fake pink hair

a couple walking about together
with abusive lip marks on their necks
a group of boys advertising
in an empty display for a empty store

so i went to the mall today
to look for a pretty prom dress
i had more fun looking about
than trying on dress upon dress

so when you are down
or feeling depressed
go to the mall
you will surely have a laugh

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Excellent poem, made me laugh and definatly an original theme, i like the change of rhythm at the end it fininshes the poem well.

    good luck in my contest!! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Ya i agree .. the mall is a funny place to go.. cute idea

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    I think its a good poem.. because when I go to the mall theres like a lot of weird people lol.. but there is room for improvement.. Mainly its just the flow of the poem other than that its cute ;) good job =)

    --emotionless.19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Liked but think could be improved! Soz!!

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